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Two years ago, I fell in love with you
And still I believe that one love was true
Your loving, tight hugs as you wrapped your arms around me
And kissed me on the cheek, where everyone could see
I remember your laughter, your grin, and your whispers
When you stole my first kiss, the feeling of your lips on mine still linger
Lips brushing against my ear, the murmur, "I love you"
And never could I express how much I loved you too
There were the arguments, the disapproval, demands from my parents that we should break apart
But nothing could stop us, for I was already giving you my heart
Comforting words, advice, opinions, you were always there
An honest best friend, a faithful lover, you still always care
But things have changed, you're in high school
Taking on a new personality, thinking you're so cool
Swearing, not caring, rude, and one drugs
Now, even with your sweetness, you're one of those fighting thugs
You're not the guy I fell in love with anymore
If I could stop thinking about you, maybe my heart wouldn't be so sore
The doggy you gave me for Christmas sits on my bed
Sometimes I hold it, and the tears still shed
I remember the thrill as my lips brushed against your ear
When you choked out, "I love you", at the end, eyes brimming with tears
There was the race of my heart whenever you even looked in my direction
Three years ago, the moment we locked eyes, we admitted we had a connection
Last July you rubbed circles on my hand as our fingers were entwined
Next July you made gestures as our friends turned their backs behind
Your hugs are still one of the ones I miss
I always remember them, and the romantic bliss
After two years, I have to finally move on
We're over, history, done, even with all the best memories to note on
From playgrounds to basketball to tag
To the fields to the pavement, or after school with my bag
You moved on, I have not
It just proves I'm not happy with what I've got
I have friends, crushes, but not you
I want to return to the past, it's true
I'd whisper, "I love you" until it was over
And be in your arms, and kiss you again, to also remember forever
I'd change so many things
No matter what punishment brings
I'll remember everything we had together, even if it brings sorrow
But I swear, that I'll never, ever, forget you, Carlo
And still I believe that one love was true
Your loving, tight hugs as you wrapped your arms around me
And kissed me on the cheek, where everyone could see
I remember your laughter, your grin, and your whispers
When you stole my first kiss, the feeling of your lips on mine still linger
Lips brushing against my ear, the murmur, "I love you"
And never could I express how much I loved you too
There were the arguments, the disapproval, demands from my parents that we should break apart
But nothing could stop us, for I was already giving you my heart
Comforting words, advice, opinions, you were always there
An honest best friend, a faithful lover, you still always care
But things have changed, you're in high school
Taking on a new personality, thinking you're so cool
Swearing, not caring, rude, and one drugs
Now, even with your sweetness, you're one of those fighting thugs
You're not the guy I fell in love with anymore
If I could stop thinking about you, maybe my heart wouldn't be so sore
The doggy you gave me for Christmas sits on my bed
Sometimes I hold it, and the tears still shed
I remember the thrill as my lips brushed against your ear
When you choked out, "I love you", at the end, eyes brimming with tears
There was the race of my heart whenever you even looked in my direction
Three years ago, the moment we locked eyes, we admitted we had a connection
Last July you rubbed circles on my hand as our fingers were entwined
Next July you made gestures as our friends turned their backs behind
Your hugs are still one of the ones I miss
I always remember them, and the romantic bliss
After two years, I have to finally move on
We're over, history, done, even with all the best memories to note on
From playgrounds to basketball to tag
To the fields to the pavement, or after school with my bag
You moved on, I have not
It just proves I'm not happy with what I've got
I have friends, crushes, but not you
I want to return to the past, it's true
I'd whisper, "I love you" until it was over
And be in your arms, and kiss you again, to also remember forever
I'd change so many things
No matter what punishment brings
I'll remember everything we had together, even if it brings sorrow
But I swear, that I'll never, ever, forget you, Carlo
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Written 09/10/11. Still believe it wasn't puppy love. Even though it's been two years, I don't think it was puppy love.
The song Vanilla Twilight by Owl City reminds me most of him.
Can't believe two years has passed already... Basically, I picked up a pen, thought of him, and started writing. I guess you could say I was crying. He wrote me a poem...and I've never really written one back.
Maybe one day he'll get this poem.
Maybe he'll cry too.
You never know.
Oh, I'm just a romanticist. :3
Please tell me your thoughts on this.
Tip: When you're truly in love, keep smiling and love every, single, freaking moment.
Written 09/10/11. Still believe it wasn't puppy love. Even though it's been two years, I don't think it was puppy love.
The song Vanilla Twilight by Owl City reminds me most of him.
Can't believe two years has passed already... Basically, I picked up a pen, thought of him, and started writing. I guess you could say I was crying. He wrote me a poem...and I've never really written one back.
Maybe one day he'll get this poem.
Maybe he'll cry too.
You never know.
Oh, I'm just a romanticist. :3
Please tell me your thoughts on this.
Tip: When you're truly in love, keep smiling and love every, single, freaking moment.
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This is so gorgeous and straight to the point. Not to mention, I love rhyming. I love this and it's so true!